PAINFUL LOVE.
By:Chantel Batista
Pass,
We had light to our
Love...
We had much more love then we have now,
and i keep asking to myself
Why is he treating me
Like this?
Why is he not telling me how he
Feel?
Why can he just give me the smile he use to put
I miss hearing you telling me i love you
With full of joy...
I hate when i am the one who need to fix our problem.
Who need to run after to you, because you wont for me.
Just please understand for once, and tell me
If you really love me when your aren't there, and ......
if you walk away without telling me
that means you never really cared.
1 comment:
Chantel- I love the structure (shape) of this poem. You clearly thought hard about where to put your line breaks and what words to emphasize on each line. Is this inspired by "Bruised Love" from Bronx Masquerade? I got the same feeling of heartbreak and pain when I read it. Very deep! I can't wait to read more of your blog posts and poems :)
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