Thursday, February 5, 2009

My poem.

PAINFUL LOVE. 
By:Chantel Batista

Looking back to our 
                 Pass, 
We had light to our 
                  Love...
We had much more love then we have now,
and i keep asking to myself
Why is he treating me 
                 Like this?
Why is he not telling me how he 
                  Feel?
Why can he just give me the smile he use to put
I miss hearing you telling me i love you 
               With full of joy...
I hate when i am the one who need to fix our problem.
Who need to run after to you, because you wont for me.
Just please understand for once, and tell me
If you  really love me when your aren't there, and ......

if you walk away without telling me 
                                                                        that means you never really cared. 

Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night


the message of this poem is being dauntless and brave in font of death, no matter who you are, what you done, and what age you are. For example,  when the poet say "Do not go gentle into the good night , rage, rage against the dying of the light .  It's telling us don't fear death, nor don't against the good night to the light. 

Also, to Show us that he is concerned about this issue. 
What the poet is doing is making us clear about this assured message. 




Poetry Responses to Bronx Masquerade



What i think about the one of the character Tyrone is seriously apathetic, He doesn't care about his future, he picture school as a "joke". My inferences about Tyrone that how he have a lot going on, he put his problems to his future and just want to give up on life, I learn about him is that when someone tell him a advise, he takes it like a bad comment,but the white folks only want the best for him, Although the way he take thing's from his mind is by writing poems such as the poem a made called Attendance. I do connect to this poem because hes attendance is imperfect just like mine, i understand what he goes through, in view of the fact that what i am going through, hes going through it now, i have a lot of comment between tyrone and me.

Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Stopping by the woods



The mood that this poem created, is wearily because he have a lot of stuff to do, and he can't rest.The device that i noticed that he use is Personification, he repeat himself in the end of the poem because he saying to himself like "wow, i still have a long way to go. ". I could connect to the poem feeling because sometimes i feel like i have a lot of work i need to get done, and seriously i just want some time to rest, but i don't have the time to do that. 

I could infer that the speaker is drained because everything he describe something, he describe it like is tired to do different things over and over , Its equivalently when i have a lot of work in school, and there's still more work that i haven't done. 



Monday, February 2, 2009

braver

The inference i could make about this poem is that she want to do something new, and not the same boring thing every day. The best describes how the poet is feeling is fearlessness because of that i could connect to this poem because i complain about what i do every single day, and i want to have The meaning of this poem is making a fuss about everything, and what something to change, although she have a thought that some day something would change.

Thursday, January 29, 2009

O Captain! My Captain!




The message of this poem is to not forget Lincoln also it's awful because he didn't see what he accomplished. The mood of the poem created is upset and accomplish because he didn't get to see what he did. They know him as a captain because he lead them like a captain would of .


Us, The people that are living now, are unhappy but also pound because he didn't quite see what he change, but we are pound that he took the chance to help us. And that what the Poem is trying to say, Because of him "The ship is anchord safe and sound. 

Friday, January 23, 2009

Inaugural Poem Response

When my teacher stand there and just reading this poem, I felt like, "Wow, look how this women is telling us step by step how things changed from the past to now." Although my emotion to this poem is very thankful because if it wasn't for these people I wouldn't be here where I am now. This poem does relate to Obama life and the inauguration because this poem is all about hope and love but also because all these type of people died for this day to come so a black man could be a elected as president.